A NEWB SONIC COMIX THE 5 PANELs and contiued

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#41

Post by Lord K. » Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:38 pm

It's improving. The word balloons look nice, but you should try to center the text in them.

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Post by The Willful Wanderer » Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:41 pm

*twitch*

I at no point mentioned the forum chat. I said 'take your quick messages that don't need to be shown to anyone elsewhere'. AS I STATED, there is a reason Instant Messenger services (MSN, YIM, AIM) and the PMs attached to this very board exist. For the love of mike, if you're responding to each other on a minute-by-minute basis, there's absolutely no call to waste server resources, space, and other people's time in scrolling past them to post in the public thread a quick little private discussion.
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#43

Post by ZeldaGirl » Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:42 pm

Okay, she meant something else. XD

But, really, I've told you guys. Just grow up - try to hold intelligent conversation, don't just flame each other. If you have a problem, Selene is right, take it to PM.

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Post by Anonymous-Children » Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:43 pm

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#45

Post by Crazybirdanimations » Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:29 pm

Try drawing your comic.
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Post by Anonymous-Children » Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:46 pm

i cant i dont have a scanner and drawings for whimps its my comic and i can make it sprite if i want to!

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#47

Post by Lord K. » Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:02 pm

You should make the word balloons closer to the characters. The empty space makes the panels look...well, empty. You should also try to make them around 10 panels. More room for plot and such.

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Post by Prince Phaeral » Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:17 pm

EDIT: Psh. My cousin said "If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all." Whatever, Blue.

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Post by Anonymous-Children » Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:18 pm

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Post by Crazybirdanimations » Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:42 pm

I don't like or hate this comic.
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#51

Post by Anonymous-Children » Sat Jul 28, 2007 12:11 am

That makes no sense you cannot have adverse reactions to one thing only one or the other

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Post by Calamity Panfan » Sat Jul 28, 2007 12:34 am

me·di·o·cre /ˌmidiˈoʊkər/
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1. of only ordinary or moderate quality; neither good nor bad; barely adequate.
and that's the waaaaaaaaaay the news goes

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#53

Post by Anonymous-Children » Sat Jul 28, 2007 3:54 am

Good night guys I'm going to bed ill have another comic on.. Wednesday see ya then!

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#54

Post by Crazybirdanimations » Sat Jul 28, 2007 4:57 am

Improve everyday.
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#55

Post by Anonymous-Children » Sat Jul 28, 2007 5:07 am

great i can't sleep i just saw the simpons movie 30 mins ago so ill just make some more comics..

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Post by Crazybirdanimations » Sat Jul 28, 2007 5:57 am

Hooray, more criticism. Good luck.
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#57

Post by Wicked Witch of the Crest » Sat Jul 28, 2007 11:52 am

Not the BEST one I've read, but I have actually seen worse. For a "newb"(as you put it) comic, it's okay. Now for a nice storyline...and updates, of course.
What's the matter, scared?

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Post by Anonymous-Children » Sat Jul 28, 2007 6:13 pm

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#59

Post by Crazybirdanimations » Sat Jul 28, 2007 7:23 pm

Not funny, done a thousand times.
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#60

Post by Anonymous-Children » Sat Jul 28, 2007 7:27 pm

your no fun nobody

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