New Force

Seraph · #1

This is a Free-Play RPG, created by myself and Aquaboy2099, but, of course, anyone and everyone is free to join.

Story:

Deep in a country setting, surrounded by beautiful trees and unruined scenery a new, pristine acadamy has been built. This acadamy isn't in any pamphlets or websites, because no one knows about, that is because it is a secret acadamy for the training and education of mutants. The halls are large and the rooms are spacious, but only a handful of gifted teenagers will be allowed to attend, students allowed to enter by invitation only.

The school's name is simple, "Freedom Force".

Sign-up: Be sure to include:

Name:
Age: (preferably young, as this is a school for teenage mutants)
Sex:
Height:
Weight:
Eyes:
Hair:
Powers and Abilities: (mutant abilities and outstanding natural talents)

Seraph · #2

Name: Kenneth Washington
Sex: Male
Age: 18
Height: 5’10”
Weight: 140
Eyes: Dark Brown
Hair: Brown, kept medium-short, swept over his forehead in large bangs, with a brown goatee.
Powers and Abilities: Morphing: Able to transform his own genetic make-up to match any matter he is in contact with. If his body is separated from the matter, his body immediately reverts to its original structure.

Name: Fiona Porter
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Height: 5’04”
Weight: 115
Eyes: Pale Blue/Gray
Hair: Red-Brown, medium length
Powers and Abilities: Telepathy. Computer/technology professional.

Name: Gavin Puma
Age 23
Sex: Male
Height: 6’01”
Weight: 165
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: White-blond, cut short and set into small spikes.
Powers and Abilities: Animalistic: Animal based mutations in both physical and mental prowess, based on the feline family. Regeneration: Low level.

aquaboy2099 · #3

Name: Betsy Pateva
Age: 17
Powers: The ability to manipulate time, such as freezing objects or people into places, travel through time, speed up time or slow down time.
Appearance: An abino, has long silver hair with maroon eyes and pale skin. 5ft 10inches tall.
Personality: A very spoiled rich girl that can be as cold as ice, but underneath that cold exterior is a kind soul.

Name: Shane Green
Age: 18
Powers: The ability to manipulate the density in the air. Can transform his body into complete mist and anyone or any objects that he touch, thus making him invulnerable to physical attacks.
Appearance: Short spikey brown hair with a boyish handsome face and grey eyes. About 5'11.
Personality: A troubled youth that prefers to keep to himself most of the time. Very quiet most of the time.

Name: Katlin
Age: 16
Powers: The ability to manipulate plants such as turning falling leaves into sharp razor blades or creating vines out of the ground to immobolize a foe.
Appearance Long wavy blue hair with golden eyes and pale skin. About 5'6 and very thin.
Personality: Very shy, but can be very outspoken just to prove a point.

[ June 27, 2005, 04:29 PM: Message edited by: aquaboy2099 ]

ANDROID_18 · #4

name: SAN MEGUMI
Age: 16
Sex: female
race: asian
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 128 lbs
Eyes: green
Hair: Black
Powers and Abilities: creation of energy
weakness: no control
personality: scatter brained smart girl.

is this ok?

[ June 27, 2005, 05:59 PM: Message edited by: Android 18 of the USF ]

Seraph · #5

Welcome to New Force Android, you're the first new poster to join us. A couple things we (Aquaboy and me) wanted to discuss with you though. Now your character's name sounds very Japanese, but your character is like 6'2" and only weighs 120-something pounds? That's really, really tall from someone with that origin and weight, she'd really look like a skeleton. Maybe shaving 6'-12' would make her more healthy (nothing wrong with short characters, and 5'2" would be a lot more believable).

Second, and hope you don't take offense to this, but you're character is a little "god-like". Three very powerful unrelated mutations is a bit much, especially if you are going to include something as big as energy creation (that means no energy can hurt her, a bit cheap?). You might wanna pick one mutation for the time being and roll with it, you can always have her grow stronger later. (I'd suggest you just make her super strong first, cause you really don't see that very often, and some little Japanese girl able to lift a 18-wheeler truck above her head would be a hoot ^^)

These are just suggestions, mind you, but Aquaboy and I have been doing New Forcde for awhile, so we'd just like to pass on the little things we learned, just makes things easier and really a lot more fun.

Now, I know I haven't done official rules, but there are a couple, this is for your benefit too, as well as for ours.

1) Respect other people's characters. Pure and simple, don't make someone else's character do something completely out of character or silly, and don't kill off other people's characters. Just be mindful of other characters personalities, and we'll try and be mindful of yours.

2) This isn't a battlefield. Ok, not so much a rule, but it still stands. This isn't non-stop fighting, robots and ninjsa appear outta nowhere and start blasting kind of RPG. Right now its just starting so its very slow, the characters don't even have access to their powers yet (keep that in mind)

3) Be mindful of other people's posts. Keep current and updated, you're posting in many other people's sotrylines, plots, and ideas (which is not a bad thing). Big plot twists are not forbidden, and you're not limited to only writing what we write, however, you should look at what other posters write, figure out the plot, and try to add on to it so the story flows. No good writing some weird plot twist that only you can finish so we're all stuck (and trust me, its happened before).

Guess that's about it. I really don't mean to sound all tyrant, I really think everything I said it just basic spit and polish. If you can anymore questions or comments, feel free to PM Aqua or me. ^^

BTW, pretty good first post.

aquaboy2099 · #6

hmm I just realized perhaps your char is prob only half japanese, but yeah let's try to give like one ability for now and develop it some more before you introduces more powers. Your char should be very inexperience and doesnt know what her powers and capabilities are. So please just pick one ability for now. Also try not to make her too power... hehe
Seraph and I aren't dbz fans... we don't like chars that are mini-gods. I prefer chars with both strenght and weakness.

ANDROID_18 · #7

OH, how sorry about that i've only played in twinkie rpg's, you know broken character's, where every one was prety much god's and we would have to fight the god's, god's.

ok how about, just enrgy creation, i still don't have control over it just yet, and if i get scared it tends to backfire, and such.

and my personality is scatter brained smart girl.
VERY CLUMSY!!!!

Seraph · #8

"Energy Creation", you mean kind of like Cyclops or Havoc with the whole plasma cannon? Or more like Jubilee where you can fire off energy, and re-absorb it?

BTW, although this is a mutant RPG, this is basically a world with no X-Men, or anyone in the X-Men universe. So no references to them, or cameos by them.

ANDROID_18 · #9

um sort of like that but my energy is blue in color and if some one like scare's me i explode it in all direction's its not just from my eye's or hands, plus much later through i intend to get control and then maybe learn to absorb, but of course i will have a limit to how much i can absorb.

Seraph · #10

Hey Android, Aquaboy and I were going over your posts, and I think that you seem to be afraid to touch ony characters but your own (I recognized this cause I used to be the exact same way when I first started). We won't be mad if you try to incorporate the others characters a bit more. Also, if you could, you can write actions a bit slower and your posts a bit longer, you see how long we write our posts (not saying they have to be quite that long, your still new to our RPG style).

Just trying to help a bit. ^_^ Remember, this is like a comic book, not like an anime.

aquaboy2099 · #11

I like that last post you did android, K i'll introduce the next scene in tonight's post.

Seraph · #12

*sits and pouts* Where did you guys go?

aquaboy2099 · #13

sorry been caught up lvling summoner, come back on to ffxi!!!! I'm trying to think up a good post, so I'll post soon.

ANDROID_18 · #14

ya i'm sorry i've had some sleep problems latley and i keep sleeping through the day, i just woke up and barely made it in time to post, but i haven't read the current rpg post i am oing there now and i hope i will have time to post there as well.

Seraph · #15

Andorid, am curious if you're still wanting to post in the RPG. Its been while since I've heard anything from you, and we're trying to move the New Force storyline along. If you don't wish to post anymore, please tell us as soon as possible, it isn't fair to create a character, dump it, then expect us to take it over. If you do plan to leave, we have a plan to take San out of the plot, but only if you feel you don't or can't post anymore.

Please contact us.

PK FIRE! · #16

Hi is it too late to join? If not here are my specks.

Name: Vincent Lowrence
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Height: 6 ft
Weight: 150 bls
Eyes: Blue Green
Hair: dark red in a braid.
Powers and Abilities: He moves at super speed.Also he tends to be quite presice at aming things( i.e. throwing weapons)

Persanality A bit impatent but good at heart. Loves to read Sifi and Fantisy books( Is actuatly working on a sifi book series at the moment.) He always has to be doing something be it reading writing, or just bouncing his leg. mostlikly to not get along with Betsy.

[ August 25, 2005, 06:22 PM: Message edited by: Blaine the shogun is #1 ]

aquaboy2099 · #17

it's not too late but the rpg is at a standstill right now since sapphire seems to be away, but did you read our rpg thread to get the feel of how we tell our story?

PK FIRE! · #18

Yes it sounds like alot of fun. I'll just wait till there is an opening before I post. Also does my char need any editing?

aquaboy2099 · #19

no it sounds good to me ^^

aquaboy2099 · #20

Since the moderator wont sticky this i'm gonna keep bumping it so it wont get lost.