My um... comic series... yeah... #3!

[supperdish]

I'm kinda starting a new comic, entitled Shadow's Adventure... I have finished the 1st comic, and I want your opionions. (I didn't spell that right...)

Anyways: Here's #1!



[ May 26, 2003, 10:17 AM: Message edited by: Shadow jr. gots AIM ]

[Dark_Mario7]

Work on it. If its meant to be humorous, try and make it more funny. Oh and only one spelling mistake but that's ok. At least someone with a comi can spell.Otherwise, not bad.

[Tonberry2k]

AAaah! Jpeg! Why do you guys save things as jpegs? And add a background. The white is boring...
-T2K

[tuatara]

You need to put in Nintendo characters or VGF characters in it. Also the back ground. Give it a nintendo background.

[blakyoshi7]

The comic is kool but... have you beaten SA2B?

[A Genius]

^Why do you care? Do you have any idea how many dead characters have been revived in comics?

Anyway, yeah. Work on humor and no JPEG.

-A Genius (I don't care about the background.)

[blakyoshi7]

^ Nope. And I ment that
*spoiler*
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Shadow isn't the ultimate life form. */spoiler*

[ May 25, 2003, 11:24 AM: Message edited by: blakyoshi7 is unofficially cuckoo. ]

[Dark_Mario7]

First off, Thunder Yoshi. Not every god damn webcomic has to have Nintendo characters in it. Some people don't understand that.

blakyoshi7, he was just saying that in his comic. It doesn't have to be true ya know.

[ May 25, 2003, 01:07 PM: Message edited by: : ]

[A Genius]

Actually, Blackyoshi.. *SPOLIER*
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Shadow IS the ultimate life form, the Biolizard was a prototype. Shadow's memories that evidentally came before the ARK shut down were false.
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-*end SPOILER*

-A Genius (At least, that's how I think it worked.)

[DarkLordYoshi]

....Do you read El Goonish Shive?

[blakyoshi7]

Originally posted by A Genius is stupid:
Actually, Blackyoshi.. *SPOLIER*
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Shadow IS the ultimate life form, the Biolizard was a prototype. Shadow's memories that evidentally came before the ARK shut down were false.
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-*end SPOILER*

-A Genius (At least, that's how I think it worked.)

remember at the end, Sonic mumbles something? It's
"Am I the ultimate life form?"

[A Genius]

^^El Goonish Shine? No, what is it?

^Something like that. But to me, that sounds like the biggest load of ass since... the biggest load of ass I ever heard.

-A Genius (There's the same chance of a chunk of rusted steel being the ultimate life form.)

[supperdish]

Thanks all for comments... I'm going to add a new part soon, so be patient. Oh, I'm too lazy to find a backround. JPEG only works for me.

[ May 25, 2003, 04:23 PM: Message edited by: Shadow jr. gots AIM ]

[supperdish]

2!

[A Genius]

Haha. Not bad. It made me laugh, which is good enough for me.

-A Genius (I remember my first comic... sort of...)

[blakyoshi7]

LOL. That Shadow, abusing his chao so ignorant to the fact it will soon turn hero because of his actions...

[GORE-ILLA]

The second was pretty good, but they're a little blurry.

[Gumchum]

Diet of nuts and beat with a whip...The story of my life...

Anyway Shadow, your comix are pretty good, but seriously, saving them as .gifs looks a lot better.
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[DarkLordYoshi]

Hehehe,that was pretty good.

[supperdish]

3!