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A NEWB SONIC COMIC
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:08 pm
by Anonymous-Children
heres the first part of the intro ill have more once i have the time
the comp messed up the l in parallel
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:12 pm
by Valigarmander
1. GRAMMAR.
2. WORD BUBBLES.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:12 pm
by Mikhail Gorbachev
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:13 pm
by Anonymous-Children
QUOTE SUPER MARIO BROS HQ where does sonic fit in that
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:15 pm
by Valigarmander
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:15 pm
by Anonymous-Children
where i want to know????
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:27 pm
by Crazybirdanimations
I hate such comics as these.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:31 pm
by Wonder Wario
It sucks. Please don't make any more.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:39 pm
by Lord K.
Are you even trying anymore?
Seriously, put some ****ing effort into your comics. Write a script. Ask yourself "Is this funny?" before putting jokes in. I can't even read most of it because of the lack of word balloons. I can't tell who half of them are talking to!
The only thing you got right was the name of the comic.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:45 pm
by Anonymous-Children
dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:48 pm
by SephirothKirby
^ Incorrect amount of asterisks.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:48 pm
by Calamity Panfan
This comic is made of fail and lose.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:59 pm
by Lord K.
No. Screw YOU.
Anonymous-Children wrote:dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you
The intro dosn't state ANYTHING except for the fact the comic is going to go downhill in the following episodes. Yes, its an intro comic, but that dosn't make it okay for it to suck.
Also, here at VGF, we say our opinions about things. If YOU don't like that, LEAVE.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:00 pm
by Anonymous-Children
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:01 pm
by Mikhail Gorbachev
Well, personally, I think this comic is awesome.
Keep up the good work.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:03 pm
by Anonymous-Children
wooo a fan and im improving as i go
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:05 pm
by Crazybirdanimations
wow, this is soooo funny, I'm laughing sooo hard that I think my guts are being re-arranged, your killing people with your comedy, I consider you a murderer, ahhhhhhahhahaha....
Not really. That sucked.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:07 pm
by Anonymous-Children
sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:12 pm
by Lord K.
Maybe you should actually LISTEN to the critisim. Maybe you'll learn somthing for once.
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:12 pm
by Crazybirdanimations
Anonymous-Children wrote:sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD
Trust me! That never works! I tried it!
