A NEWB SONIC COMIC

Anonymous-Children · #1

heres the first part of the intro ill have more once i have the time

the comp messed up the l in parallel

Valigarmander · #2

1. GRAMMAR.

2. WORD BUBBLES.

Mikhail Gorbachev · #3

forums/comics-spriting-forum-no-idiots- ... seriously/

Anonymous-Children · #4

QUOTE SUPER MARIO BROS HQ where does sonic fit in that

Valigarmander · #5

Anonymous-Children · #6

where i want to know????

Crazybirdanimations · #7

I hate such comics as these.

Wonder Wario · #8

It sucks. Please don't make any more.

Lord K. · #9

Are you even trying anymore?

Seriously, put some ****ing effort into your comics. Write a script. Ask yourself "Is this funny?" before putting jokes in. I can't even read most of it because of the lack of word balloons. I can't tell who half of them are talking to!

The only thing you got right was the name of the comic.

Anonymous-Children · #10

dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

SephirothKirby · #11

^ Incorrect amount of asterisks.

Calamity Panfan · #12

This comic is made of fail and lose.

Lord K. · #13

No. Screw YOU.

Anonymous-Children wrote:dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

The intro dosn't state ANYTHING except for the fact the comic is going to go downhill in the following episodes. Yes, its an intro comic, but that dosn't make it okay for it to suck.

Also, here at VGF, we say our opinions about things. If YOU don't like that, LEAVE.

Anonymous-Children · #14

Mikhail Gorbachev · #15

Well, personally, I think this comic is awesome.
Keep up the good work.

Anonymous-Children · #16

wooo a fan and im improving as i go

Crazybirdanimations · #17

wow, this is soooo funny, I'm laughing sooo hard that I think my guts are being re-arranged, your killing people with your comedy, I consider you a murderer, ahhhhhhahhahaha....

Not really. That sucked.

Anonymous-Children · #18

sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

Lord K. · #19

Maybe you should actually LISTEN to the critisim. Maybe you'll learn somthing for once.

Crazybirdanimations · #20

Anonymous-Children wrote:sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

Trust me! That never works! I tried it!