conclusion to 1-up's battle with vapor

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conclusion to 1-up's battle with vapor

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Post by 1-up Salesman » Fri May 23, 2008 4:22 pm

The man came out of the portal he had just made. He layed Rael down on the ground. The man stood up completely silent. "You were lucky you survived, boy." The man had brought Rael to his own house.

The man turned to leave.

Rael's eyes slowly opened. The first thing he saw was the man.
"Who..are you?" The man turned around."Why must you need to know?" he said. Rael turned his head toward his arms and found that the man had bandaged him. "You.. healed me..?" The man started to go again.
"No, wait. Who are you?"
The man turned. "If you must know, it is Kanen." The man left.
Rael rose to follow, but he could find the man nowhere.

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Post by Seeking Attention » Fri May 23, 2008 4:28 pm

Did you really need to add a "conclusion" battle? I thought Galefore said not to flood the Gunjin.

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Post by 1-up Salesman » Fri May 23, 2008 4:32 pm

sorry, it was just so I could introduce my new character. And so the end of my fight with vapor would almost make sense.

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Post by Vapor » Fri May 23, 2008 4:43 pm

Yeah, you don't need to make a "conclusion topic" for a battle. Or a topic for introducing a new character.

And I didn't really need that ending to make sense--nor did Zarjav, being a shaman...made of mercury nonetheless.

So for future reference, don't bother with topics like this.

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