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Oh, haha. Yes, They will be posted as soon as we get that last name remember. Oh, nevermind post pending, look here for your new toys, Happy early Birthday.
A minute to explain, if you will. These would consider dual characters, used with permission by both Chibimod3 and T3hDarkness.
The first Character still needs a name, Post any suggestions if you like, and always feel free to criticize or praise.
forums/370625-post269.html
Name:
Identity: Research Texts refer to him as “Chimera 036 - Failure”
Age: Reborn Every Morning
Species: Phoenix Chimera, Male
Class: Hoplite Dragoon
Appearance:
At dawn, an egg hatches from a pile of ashes. When the shell crumbles away it reveals a bright-eyed little boy wearing ill fitting gold trimmed red armor and carrying a round shield and hooked spear much too big for him to wield. He rapidly ages to maturity and becomes a fierce warrior with enormous amounts of energy by the time the sun is high. He takes to the air on freshly grown wings and makes vicious but straightforward flyby attacks and full use of his phoenix flame. Over the course of the afternoon his armor tarnishes and his feathers start to gray and fall out. As an old man sensing his immanent death his fighting style switches to rely more on turning and countering his opponent’s moves. As the last rays of the sun vanish his body darkens until it is an ashy black and erupts into a huge ball of flame. Melting his gear into slag and completely destroying his body. All that is left is the egg.
Personality:
As a newborn he is curious of the world but mostly interested in food. Even a small slight to the child can become a bitter insult, erupting into a burning hatred as soon as the wings of his hotheaded older self sprout. When old age catches up with him in the evening, he reflects on the bombardment of memories of the thousands of lifetimes he has lived and the thousands of lonely deaths he has suffered.
Possessions:
He has only that which was on him when he hatched anything else is destroyed at dusk. Any item taken from him will also incinerate when the sun goes down including any of the gold he has spent.
Powers:
As he ages wounds become painful old scars and his metabolism quickly neutralizes poison and disease. As a boy he has no extraordinary abilities, just a huge appetite. He is fiercest when the noonday sun burns bright, using his spear and shining shield to strike down any that dare oppose him. As the darkness approaches his power fades, leaving nothing but a feeble old man, tired and worn out. If pressed to continue fighting he will try to trip or turn his foe’s attacks until the sun sets and his life is snuffed out. In desperate situations he will latch onto an opponent just before the end and attempt to destroy them. If he is killed before the sun sets, he will explode into fiery death throes and still reincarnate the next morning. If the egg is destroyed, it too detonates and reforms one week later.
Name: Kyle Franz
Identities: Wanted posters say “Lightning Butcher” and “Psycho Serpent”
Age: 17
Species: Human, Male
Class: Lightning Berserker
Appearance:
A short boy with fair skin, wild platinum blond hair, and sparkling blue eyes. He is always seen wearing a silver colored breastplate with matching bracers and greaves over his light grey tunic and trail-worn leather boots. Something seems peculiar about the child; perhaps the faint smell of ozone or the incredibly intense look in his eyes.
History:
As a small boy tending the to his family’s flock a Lightning Serpent attacked his hometown, smashing through the walls and devouring every last resident. Fully realizing how dangerous the giant beast was, he ran back and bravely (but foolishly) chased after it with nothing more than a wooden staff in hand. He struck the elemental, succeeding in nothing more than attracting its attention and being blown back by its immense electrical power. The monster turned to devour him just as a blue bolt struck him. The two powers reacted and ultimately caused the monster to be drawn into his body. When he awoke after a week his hair was white and he found that thinking about the ordeal caused electricity to crackle over his skin. After another week he realized that not only could he control it, focusing the power onto just his hands. During the next few (very frightening) months he found that lightning is inexplicably drawn to him but doesn’t hurt in any way.
News of a boy throwing lightning in the ruins of the town took a long time to reach the capitol but as soon as it did a special military unit was sent to seize him, believing him a dangerous fledgling sorcerer responsible for the devastation of the village. After a brief misunderstanding he unintentionally loosed his power on the guard. Disastrous in trying to capture him and control him in the name of the country‘s military might, he was declared too big a liability and a large bounty has been placed on his head.
He has been on the run ever since, honing his skills on any that try to claim the reward.
Personality:
He tries to be a calm and good-natured fellow but part of the Lightning Serpent’s temperament has been absorbed into his own personality. He completely loses himself in a fight, paying no heed to innocents or to his own wounds once he starts trading blows.
Possessions:
Aside from his light armor, he carries two special globes given to him by his uncle. Each small glass sphere makes it easier to focus his energy into a nearly solid blade can be charged with his extra power and be drained when the situation calls.
Powers:
He is no more skilled with his swords than swinging a sturdy branch but what he lacks in skill he makes up for with tenacity and raw power. When using his “Blue Demon” his wounds heal supernaturally fast and his strength and speed are increased tenfold. Being cut or even just struck while he is angry causes electricity to skip across the weapon (even wooden weapons) towards whatever just hit him. Any electrical discharges near him, magical or not, increase his power. For a brief period of time (no more than a few seconds) he can fully manifest the beast wholly under his control. During this time, the serpent is coiled around him protectively.
Water is his bane twofold because he never learned how to swim and it makes it harder and painful to use his power.
Special Attacks:
Through trial and error, Kyle has learned that shouting out the names of his attacks at the top of his lungs can actually make them easier to focus. Some of his common tricks include:
Ball lightning: A ball of pulsing energy that travels slowly in a strait line, burning even through stone.
Blue Demon: He unleashes a fragment of the serpent’s power to increase his health, speed, and strength.
Coiling Wave: Bolts of lightning strikes Kyle and everything within fifteen feet around him.
Lightning Burst: A special version of Lightning Ripper specifically developed to sever bindings
Lightning Ripper: He collects energy into his forefinger to make a quick swing than can cut nearly anything
Lightning Rod: He holds both hands to the sky and invites a dry storm’s wrath.
Pulsing Wave: Energy collects in his left palm until he touches someone or releases it into an sixty foot cone.
Snakebite: A straightforward-charge with a range of about twenty feet the moves faster than human eyes can see.
Serpent’s Eye: By focusing on the electricity in living creatures he can tell their location even in complete darkness.
Serpent’s Laugh: Small versions of the beast travel through the air in an erratically until they strike something.
Serpent’s Malice: A bolt from Kyle travels along the ground skipping around obstacles to hit his foe.
Serpent’s Mercy: A quiet thrust that quickly stuns the target without leaving any marks.
Serpent’s Visit: A flying knee-charge to stun and knock flying opponents out of the sky.
Strobe: Bright light flashes making it hard to discern his location from the after images.
Thunderclap: Kyle creates a earsplitting lightning strike that disorients foes and makes it hard to cast spells
Rapid Bites: A draining version of Snakebite that can rip through a whole formation of enemies up to twenty times in less than a second.
Ripper Chain: A slower version of Lightning Ripper that launches five of the defense piercing attacks.
Serpent’s Fury: Temporarily releasing the full power of the Serpent into the world, The beast tries to crush any humans not in its protective coil.
Notes:
A Lightning Serpent is a very rare type of incorporeal elemental that has an average lifespan of only eighteen minutes. They start around eighty feet long and fifteen feet wide but grow larger by the second. The appetite and destructive power of these creatures is legendary, but most of the carnage caused is attributed only to natural disasters and the storms that herald them.
A minute to explain, if you will. These would consider dual characters, used with permission by both Chibimod3 and T3hDarkness.
The first Character still needs a name, Post any suggestions if you like, and always feel free to criticize or praise.
forums/370625-post269.html
Name:
Identity: Research Texts refer to him as “Chimera 036 - Failure”
Age: Reborn Every Morning
Species: Phoenix Chimera, Male
Class: Hoplite Dragoon
Appearance:
At dawn, an egg hatches from a pile of ashes. When the shell crumbles away it reveals a bright-eyed little boy wearing ill fitting gold trimmed red armor and carrying a round shield and hooked spear much too big for him to wield. He rapidly ages to maturity and becomes a fierce warrior with enormous amounts of energy by the time the sun is high. He takes to the air on freshly grown wings and makes vicious but straightforward flyby attacks and full use of his phoenix flame. Over the course of the afternoon his armor tarnishes and his feathers start to gray and fall out. As an old man sensing his immanent death his fighting style switches to rely more on turning and countering his opponent’s moves. As the last rays of the sun vanish his body darkens until it is an ashy black and erupts into a huge ball of flame. Melting his gear into slag and completely destroying his body. All that is left is the egg.
Personality:
As a newborn he is curious of the world but mostly interested in food. Even a small slight to the child can become a bitter insult, erupting into a burning hatred as soon as the wings of his hotheaded older self sprout. When old age catches up with him in the evening, he reflects on the bombardment of memories of the thousands of lifetimes he has lived and the thousands of lonely deaths he has suffered.
Possessions:
He has only that which was on him when he hatched anything else is destroyed at dusk. Any item taken from him will also incinerate when the sun goes down including any of the gold he has spent.
Powers:
As he ages wounds become painful old scars and his metabolism quickly neutralizes poison and disease. As a boy he has no extraordinary abilities, just a huge appetite. He is fiercest when the noonday sun burns bright, using his spear and shining shield to strike down any that dare oppose him. As the darkness approaches his power fades, leaving nothing but a feeble old man, tired and worn out. If pressed to continue fighting he will try to trip or turn his foe’s attacks until the sun sets and his life is snuffed out. In desperate situations he will latch onto an opponent just before the end and attempt to destroy them. If he is killed before the sun sets, he will explode into fiery death throes and still reincarnate the next morning. If the egg is destroyed, it too detonates and reforms one week later.
Name: Kyle Franz
Identities: Wanted posters say “Lightning Butcher” and “Psycho Serpent”
Age: 17
Species: Human, Male
Class: Lightning Berserker
Appearance:
A short boy with fair skin, wild platinum blond hair, and sparkling blue eyes. He is always seen wearing a silver colored breastplate with matching bracers and greaves over his light grey tunic and trail-worn leather boots. Something seems peculiar about the child; perhaps the faint smell of ozone or the incredibly intense look in his eyes.
History:
As a small boy tending the to his family’s flock a Lightning Serpent attacked his hometown, smashing through the walls and devouring every last resident. Fully realizing how dangerous the giant beast was, he ran back and bravely (but foolishly) chased after it with nothing more than a wooden staff in hand. He struck the elemental, succeeding in nothing more than attracting its attention and being blown back by its immense electrical power. The monster turned to devour him just as a blue bolt struck him. The two powers reacted and ultimately caused the monster to be drawn into his body. When he awoke after a week his hair was white and he found that thinking about the ordeal caused electricity to crackle over his skin. After another week he realized that not only could he control it, focusing the power onto just his hands. During the next few (very frightening) months he found that lightning is inexplicably drawn to him but doesn’t hurt in any way.
News of a boy throwing lightning in the ruins of the town took a long time to reach the capitol but as soon as it did a special military unit was sent to seize him, believing him a dangerous fledgling sorcerer responsible for the devastation of the village. After a brief misunderstanding he unintentionally loosed his power on the guard. Disastrous in trying to capture him and control him in the name of the country‘s military might, he was declared too big a liability and a large bounty has been placed on his head.
He has been on the run ever since, honing his skills on any that try to claim the reward.
Personality:
He tries to be a calm and good-natured fellow but part of the Lightning Serpent’s temperament has been absorbed into his own personality. He completely loses himself in a fight, paying no heed to innocents or to his own wounds once he starts trading blows.
Possessions:
Aside from his light armor, he carries two special globes given to him by his uncle. Each small glass sphere makes it easier to focus his energy into a nearly solid blade can be charged with his extra power and be drained when the situation calls.
Powers:
He is no more skilled with his swords than swinging a sturdy branch but what he lacks in skill he makes up for with tenacity and raw power. When using his “Blue Demon” his wounds heal supernaturally fast and his strength and speed are increased tenfold. Being cut or even just struck while he is angry causes electricity to skip across the weapon (even wooden weapons) towards whatever just hit him. Any electrical discharges near him, magical or not, increase his power. For a brief period of time (no more than a few seconds) he can fully manifest the beast wholly under his control. During this time, the serpent is coiled around him protectively.
Water is his bane twofold because he never learned how to swim and it makes it harder and painful to use his power.
Special Attacks:
Through trial and error, Kyle has learned that shouting out the names of his attacks at the top of his lungs can actually make them easier to focus. Some of his common tricks include:
Ball lightning: A ball of pulsing energy that travels slowly in a strait line, burning even through stone.
Blue Demon: He unleashes a fragment of the serpent’s power to increase his health, speed, and strength.
Coiling Wave: Bolts of lightning strikes Kyle and everything within fifteen feet around him.
Lightning Burst: A special version of Lightning Ripper specifically developed to sever bindings
Lightning Ripper: He collects energy into his forefinger to make a quick swing than can cut nearly anything
Lightning Rod: He holds both hands to the sky and invites a dry storm’s wrath.
Pulsing Wave: Energy collects in his left palm until he touches someone or releases it into an sixty foot cone.
Snakebite: A straightforward-charge with a range of about twenty feet the moves faster than human eyes can see.
Serpent’s Eye: By focusing on the electricity in living creatures he can tell their location even in complete darkness.
Serpent’s Laugh: Small versions of the beast travel through the air in an erratically until they strike something.
Serpent’s Malice: A bolt from Kyle travels along the ground skipping around obstacles to hit his foe.
Serpent’s Mercy: A quiet thrust that quickly stuns the target without leaving any marks.
Serpent’s Visit: A flying knee-charge to stun and knock flying opponents out of the sky.
Strobe: Bright light flashes making it hard to discern his location from the after images.
Thunderclap: Kyle creates a earsplitting lightning strike that disorients foes and makes it hard to cast spells
Rapid Bites: A draining version of Snakebite that can rip through a whole formation of enemies up to twenty times in less than a second.
Ripper Chain: A slower version of Lightning Ripper that launches five of the defense piercing attacks.
Serpent’s Fury: Temporarily releasing the full power of the Serpent into the world, The beast tries to crush any humans not in its protective coil.
Notes:
A Lightning Serpent is a very rare type of incorporeal elemental that has an average lifespan of only eighteen minutes. They start around eighty feet long and fifteen feet wide but grow larger by the second. The appetite and destructive power of these creatures is legendary, but most of the carnage caused is attributed only to natural disasters and the storms that herald them.