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Post by deathscythe » Sun Nov 05, 2006 10:51 pm

I would like to have another battle with some one, who post more along the longer side, so I can improve, yes, I know that I am currently in two battles but, there both going slow, so I would like to have another. yep.
I will use Affliction(on the very last page, very first post, very first character), because he is my fave character.
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Basic Gunjin rules.
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Post by t3hDarkness » Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:27 pm

A masked figure wearing a long black coat steps out into the light coming from the narrow windows of the ancient clock tower. He speaks loudly so as to be heard over the cogs.

"Garamy, I am sorry, but my master wishes you dead, and I must obey. Please do not hate me child, for this is nothing personal."

He solemnly lifts his right arm and snaps his fingers. Razor wire launches itself from his cuff to try to spear the wizard Affliction.

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Post by deathscythe » Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:35 pm

OoC: Well... ok.

Affliction Drew his sword as quickly as he could and reflected the wire back into another direction, and the wire went through a wall. Afflicition didn't know the fighters stile, so did not know that it would come at him, it was nothing but a reflex, that saved him. "you will not have me dead, if you want me dead, but if dead is dead, than dead is what you shall become, you shall live no longer, as coming here, was your final mistake." Affliction started a flame on his sword, that would extend all the way to the end. The sword of Sahiro, was no able and ready to kill anything that would cross it's path. Affliction looked at the masked man, who to was looking at him for his time to move. Both the fighters charged in midair and met. Afflictions sword was deflected by another alchemy move, The fighters both fail to the floor of the great clock tower, and the great bell at the top started to ring. The ring had never been louder before, and both the fighters had to stop. They both felt great pain that went on and on until they could feel nothing but pain.

Finally the bell stopped ringing, the fighters laid there in pain, but just as the ringing was about to stop Afflicition stood up. "wow, headachhe said, "that's alright shouldn't affect me much" Replied the masked fighter. "me either" Said Afflicition with a smirk. " no more of that" said Affliction. "WE can continue now" This time The masked figure attacked first, and charged Affliction throwing another sphere, Affliction deflected it to the side of the room and charged swinging his sword straight at The masked man. The Masked man pulled out a wire before, and rapped it around the flaming blade, But he did not take in notice that the sword was extremely hot, and would melt the wire. The wire melted, and the masked fighter jumped back, Affliction charged and this time swung for the arm, succeeding somewhat, he missed the arm, but ended up getting him on the side of his waist, causing a good burn, and some what of a gash. Affliction jumped back into his stance. A candle in the top of the room went out causing about 1/4th of the room to go into complete darkness. "heh, wont matter, my swords a flame, i don't need light to be made for me, I make in on my own" said Affliction, "Well, than, I guess I will know where you are all through the fight now wont I." The fighters just stared until The masked man brought out another wire, and prepared to use it. " Who are you?" remarked, " that does not matter" said the masked fighter.

"Well well than, lets fight harder" said Affliction. That they did. Affliction jumped forwards the other fighter and swung his sword. The fighter dodged the attack and swung his own wire. The wire barely got Affliction, but because of how sharp it was it caused a pretty deep cut, and blood started pouring out of his leg. "hmpff, you have to do better than that" said affliction, if you cant, you wont beat me, He swung his sword and caught the masked fighter by surprise. and got him in the left leg, in just about the same spot Affliction had got him. "I returned the favor." said Affliction, but nonetheless they both continued to fight hard.
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Post by t3hDarkness » Mon Nov 06, 2006 11:12 pm

It was plain to see a striaght forward attack would get him nowhere, especially when the demon-wizard's sword was hot enough to melt even his alchemically treated wire, Brass knight backed off, holding his hand against the wound on his side and announcing, "This dance is amusing, but lets change the tune a little." He ran forward, but not towards Affliction.

Razor wire came from all directions he was able to block the worst of these atacks with Sahiro's bladebut the rest opened small cut all over Affliction's body. Brass Knight waved his arm and another series of wires came from all directions, this time they weren't as bad and scarred mage was able to dodge most of them, but he was still inadvertently scored with many small bloody cuts.

Wondering where the masked man was attacking from, he noticed a glint in the air. He realized with horror, thet every attack he had deflected had simply been done to set up the field. Razor wire had been strung all over the tower by their previous fighting.

Affliction had to think of something quick, or he would be torn to pieces. He made a hand symbol to conjure a thin mist, at least now he could see the wires. He swung Sahiro to cut down the nearest strings.

During the distraction, Brass Knight stole away to prepare a spell or to simply allow Affliction time to bleed. He kept moving in the shadowy parts of the clocktower stringing wire nets behind him. As he moved he chanted, each powerful word echoing and growing louder as he repeated it, continuing until the very tower vibrated.

Suddenly it stopped and the silence was more deafening then the chant ever could have been.

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Post by deathscythe » Mon Nov 06, 2006 11:51 pm

Affliction after conjuring the spell, looked around, wire was everywhere. There was little walk way without stepping on wire. Affliction ran forward being careful to not step on the wire that could really do some harm. He kept dodging wire, and he knew that he would have to charge before he could complete his spell. Affliction continued, and jumped at the masked fighter but he did not catch him off guard, before he jumped a large raiser sharp wire, not a lot, just one came into view, and went through Afflictions foot, and into the ground. From a distance all that could be seen would be a wire, going from one wall all the way down into Afflictions foot. Affliction stood in pain looking at the wire which had pierced through his foot. Blood came out of his sandal, and was now going all over the floor, after a few seconds there was a small puddle.

"what.... the.... ." said Affliction, he had been caught off guard. "...no.... you couldn't have..." he continued. His foot, was now so painful that nothing else could be felt but pain in his left foot. Affliction yanked the wire out of his foot but was unsuccessful as a small part of riped off wire remained in his foot. Affliction became angry, and The flame on the sword of Sahiro Broadened. "you will pay for what you have done" said Affliction with an angry tone of voice that, no one had heard out of him before, in fact, he had never used it before, and didn't even know his voice could broaden that much. So he was confused himself.

Affliction jumped forward at rage as the masked man seemed to be conjuring something else. But, the masked man could not finish in time, and Affliction was able to cut his arm. The arm squirted out of blood, because Affliction had definitely hid a Major vain. A large burn formed on the arm in which Affliction had hit. There was little that he felt he couldn't do, but as soon as he started becoming more cocky. A larger wire than normal shot out, followed by many more wires, Affliction was able to deflect all of them but a few. The ones that he had not blocked caused him to regret no getting them, another of them went into the side of his foot, the same foot in which had been pierced earlier. and the other was just a small scratch on the side of his arm.

Affliction yanked the other wire out of his foot and walked forward with rage. The mask man caused more wires to come from all over but Affliction had gotten a work out with his reflexes, and now he is normally able to dodge them now. " I have gotten better. You may have to find something else to beat me now." Affliction continued to walk forward and when he reach forward to swing his sword, but he had fallen into the masked man's trap.

Affliction looked down at the blood drenched floor. There was little spots on the floor not covered in blood. Affliction had stepped into a some what large thing of wire and his sandals had been torn to pieces, as of the bottom of his foot. Afflicition looked around the room and noticed pieces of flesh lying every where, all of from his feat. Affliction new his feet could handle little more. The masked man took this time to throw more razor wires, Affliction very few of them. about five blades had pierced into his legs and arms, and more small cuts were all over his body. "I'll ask you one more time, whats your name" Affliction asked with some what of a rage in his voice.
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Post by t3hDarkness » Tue Nov 07, 2006 12:25 am

"Calm yourself, young one, rage will only make it worse," he said in a quiet voice. "My name, when I am allowed to bear one, is Chase Alphonse, my masters call me Brass Knight."

He looks away for a second and looks back, carefully pulling away some of the wires. "I would weep if a child died before justice is served. I have but one option, if you make a deal with me. I could protect you from the Lord of Sahiro, voiding his contract against you."

He tears off his right sleeve to reveal a gleaming brazen gauntlet with deep cut through it. The metal was starting to meld back together, but the flesh didn't seem to be as lucky.

He holds down his bloody hand to offer a handshake, "Will your honor allow you to accept."

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Post by deathscythe » Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:49 pm

I'll continue the fight when I get home, from skating.
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Post by deathscythe » Thu Nov 09, 2006 11:58 pm

Affliction refused and pushed away his opponent, He had never taken a lending hand from a fellow fighter before and he was not about to start now. Affliction did however take the time to rip his shirt and rap it around his foot. "now lets continue" said affliction. Affliction re drew the sword of Sahiro. Affliction sorta ran, and sorta limped towards Chase. He swung forward faster than Chase thought that he would, because Chase had thought he would be Sloan down by his weathered foot. Affliction had nicked his arm, burning the arm off of Chases Sleeve.

"so Nick, who is your master?" asked Affliction really not knowing who in the area wanted to kill him. No reply came from Chases lips. But instead More wires, Affliction dodged all of them. Affliction this time called out a spell, and suddenly the entire room was shaking. Chase bent down and looked up, as the entire room was being shaken by the wind. Then suddenly Lighting came through the tower and somewhat struck the ground behind Chase, Chase jumped and ended up on one of his very own razor wires. "Ironic huh, you thought, I would use the spell on you, but Instead I used the spell behind, you setting you up in a trap you created." said affliction with a smirk.

Chase looked down and saw his feet were now bleeding as well, as torn shoes. "I am very clever" said affliction boasting. Affliction charged again and jumped at Chase, and Chase merely bent over to dodge this attack as Affliction was hurled at a razor wire that could have killed him if it wasn't for his midair reflexes. "I should be more careful" whispered Affliction to him self. And even more blood came out the side of his shoes. Blood was starting to map out the fight on the ground now as both the fighters were bleeding pretty badly.

Chase stood up and walked forward in great pain, as his cuts were fresher than Afflictions. He looked at Affliction who was now kneeling on the grown in pain as well. "you had your chance" said Chase, "you blew it". Affliction lunged forward with the sword of Sahiro before Chase could do any real damage to the area, and him. Affliction actually manage to cut one of the wounded feet he thought he wouldn't be able to reach.

OoC:Sorry for the mistakes, I have a lot more on my mind right now, so this is been hard just to post in.
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Post by t3hDarkness » Mon Nov 13, 2006 5:49 pm

Brass Knight stood up, greatly pained, "If you truly wish to learn more, then behold this." he lifted off his mask, but only long enough to spit venom at the wizard's wounds. Affliction recoiled, part in surprise, part in pain, and stumbled to the ground.

Free to take his time while his opponent was temporarily incapacated, the assassin explained, "My master is a dishonorable tyrant, but I may not disobey him. You are farmilliar with this man for he has been the driving force of your life, from the day he dueled and killed your father to this moment where you fight his puppet."

He looked up to check the two seals he had chanted earlier on the ceiling. The destruction on was complete and the detainment seal was starting to fade.

It would have been so easy for him to finished his downed opponent, but even an assassin has some honor. Instead, he pulled wires from around him to create an attack reflecting array, seven corners held within a circle. "Stand, if you can, and tell me why this King wishes so badly for your head, but be quick about it, we only have a moment before real time starts again and this whole place comes crashing down."

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Post by deathscythe » Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:06 pm

Affliction was angry, really angry. He could not bare the thought of losing to a man, that was working for the man who killed his father. Afflicition looked left than right. He knew there was no chance of escape now. As anger was building up in Afflictions head more and more. There was little that could be done to calm him. There was no point in even trying so Chase, just watched.

"This fight will come to a towering end, wont it." said affliction who let the anger take advantage of him. Affliction charged with new force, and large rage, with the blazed sword of Sahiro in one hand, anger in the other. Afflicition had to make a correct move to end the fight, but that did not happen at all, nor would it. Affliction strove left, and swung the blade a second time, this time getting his leg just a little.

Affliction swung again and again with rage, mainly barely getting him, but the fourth swing brought him luck. Affliction cut off chases arm, as blood squirt out of Chases arm, Chase yelled in pain... Affliction was finally happy.

Affliction had thought about what to do to kill chase for a moment, but nothing besides great torcher could do him good. So he decided to use a great ancient weather spell that would fry, and tear his opening apart. Affliction arose, and started to chant. A large wind started to brew, and the ancient clock tower started to actually wave back and forth. Now the fight was about to come to an end.

Afflictions rage grew as his spell became more and more powerful, out side it looked as if the end of the world was sure to come, but only in the area. Affliction continued to chant, chase watched as he knew what was about to happen, he used the last bit of his energy to use razor wires to pierce through Afflictions heart, but it was to late. The giant clock tower collapsed under the great pressure, affliction and Chase died of great pain.

OoC: just a quick ending, this will have no effect on the tourney, which is what really counts, since were battling each other in the first round, so yeah :)
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Post by t3hDarkness » Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:20 pm

If anyone has any comments to make, please do, I'm starved for feedback.

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Post by Seeking Attention » Fri Nov 17, 2006 5:41 pm

Well the ending was cool I guess.

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Post by Galefore » Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:00 pm

They were crushed. Ouchie.

Erm, good battle you two. Good luck in the tournament.

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Post by deathscythe » Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:04 pm

I realize it's a short battle, but we decided to end it fast when the tourney started.
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